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Post by Dare Blackwood-Hardt on Apr 4, 2010 1:38:42 GMT -5
All right, I'll rate yours. I'm giving it an 8. The pictures are all from the same photo shoot, which gives your character a cohesive look, whoever made it had fun with the font, and it says something about your character. It might be a little heavy on the glow/shadow, but overall I think its simplicity in actual graphics works.
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Verity Bromley
Slytherin
7th year
Every rose has its thorn.
Posts: 1,099
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Post by Verity Bromley on Apr 4, 2010 1:45:13 GMT -5
alright i'm gonna fix it up
i give yours a 9 for those amazing eyes and i love the hurt angel
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Celyn Corvus
Ravenclaw
6th Year
Creativity isn't my talent; it's my sin.
Posts: 1,617
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Post by Celyn Corvus on Apr 4, 2010 4:49:37 GMT -5
I'll give you a 6. I know this sounds harsh, but please bear with me; the first thing for me is the flare. I feel like it's not needed. For me, it's only necessary in very rare cases and I have never really found a person using it at the right time. The blending is also blocky, if you had properly 'trimmed' the edge my 6 would have been a 8 because it's one of those things that really gets to me. The eyes are just a bit over done.
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Verity Bromley
Slytherin
7th year
Every rose has its thorn.
Posts: 1,099
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Post by Verity Bromley on Apr 4, 2010 13:37:30 GMT -5
is it better now? i feel like there should be text but my free trial of Photoshop ended and the program i have has terrible text options.
i'm am giving your avatar an 8 i like way everything blends in nicely but the eyes still pop
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Celyn Corvus
Ravenclaw
6th Year
Creativity isn't my talent; it's my sin.
Posts: 1,617
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Post by Celyn Corvus on Apr 4, 2010 13:43:56 GMT -5
I didn't make the avatar, just found it For the new one I'm giving it an 7.5. It lost points from the edges of her once again. I'll give you a suggestion (which is what I basically did to my signature. Make the background the fore ground then fade the opacity. using a feathered brush (not the harsh opaque one) erase over her face and body, but doesn't go beyond the edge. When you return the opacity to 100% it will be like she fades into the picture. (oh and a good proportion suggestion of width by height: 500 by 200
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Verity Bromley
Slytherin
7th year
Every rose has its thorn.
Posts: 1,099
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Post by Verity Bromley on Apr 4, 2010 13:47:16 GMT -5
eh ok maybe some other day i'm too lazy now haha
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Celyn Corvus
Ravenclaw
6th Year
Creativity isn't my talent; it's my sin.
Posts: 1,617
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Post by Celyn Corvus on Apr 4, 2010 14:11:13 GMT -5
It's really pretty and I'm a sucker for simple things (even if sometimes my own stuff isn't simple) It definitely tells us who Verity is ;D
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